Tuesday, 29 November 2016

Pitch feedback

Presentation
Once we knew what the content of our short opening of a film was going to be, we had to put together a presentation of it and present it to the rest of the class and teachers. The presentation included slides of what the story outline was going to be, the characters, the film conventions, the settings and characters that we were going to include, our target audience, the production company logo and the music we wanted to include in our short film.
The feedback that we received after doing our presentation was that we should have a look at more teen angst opening sequences so we can get an idea of what is included and also some inspiration for our own one. Also we got told to be more specific with who our target audience was as we focused a lot on what age it was going to be aimed at rather than what gender, so the gender that we would focus our film on would be females as it is a lot more relatable to them compared to boys, this is because the main character is a female and it is more likely that females would go through what she is going through in the film too. The feedback we received was also to work more on our logo and to use Photoshop to make it look more presentable.


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